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Wednesday 9 March 2016

Narrative Writing

Once upon a time in a dark dark world there were hawks soaring the sky looking for food like a hungry lion going to eat a human. There was a bad wolf and a good wolf they fought each other until one fell down to the ground and never get back up!!!!!!!.


Once upon a time in a dark dark world where hawks were soaring the skies looking for food like a school of soring prahanas There was a bad wolf and a good wolf they fought each other until one fell down to the ground and never get back up!!!!!!!.


One day the good wolf fell and perished into the darkness. He tried to get up but his leg was stuck in the mud and the mud was all dried up and the hawks came soaring down at him but he used all his power and strength to try and get his feet out of the dry mud.


He did it but he was so weak to fight but they met at the end of the forest
they were looking at each other eye to eye.
The bad wolf rushed up on him tearing his
flesh draining his soul turning him into a shadow
now he fight who ever tries to get him back on the ground but he bait everyone except the bad wolf. Nearly every one stood up and watched.


It was shadow vs wolf they fought and fought
until the shadow wolf drained him back to the underworld and they knew that there was going to be a great world.

2 comments:

  1. Heyy Isaac my name is Toko from up north I loved the way you started you sentence off
    Once upon a time in a dark dark world there were hawks soaring the sky looking for food like a hungry lion going to eat a human Kia Ora

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  2. Heyy Isaac my name is Toko from up north I loved the way you started you sentence off
    Once upon a time in a dark dark world there were hawks soaring the sky looking for food like a hungry lion going to eat a human Kia Ora

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