My Holiday Highlight
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WALT: write a recount about my school holiday using effective paragraphs.
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Topic: School Holidays.
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about your holiday experiences.
Text type: Recount
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine
Have you ever been to… Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?...During the school holidays …
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Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: One thing you did in the first week of the holidays
P3: One thing you did in the second week of the holidays
P4: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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Once you have finished make sure to mark with a buddy or yourself using our PARAGRAPH RUBRIC. Draw an image that represents your writing in sumo paint/ABC paint or create a wordcloud.
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Immersion Assembly
Topic: Immersion Assembly
Audience: PES, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell people about our immersion assembly.
Text type: Recount
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Key Vocabulary and Sentence Beginnings:
teachers, hilarious, delightful, joyful, overwhelmed, over the moon, fantastic, superb, on cloud nine
Wow! What an exciting … Guess what?... What a blast we had at…
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Structure:
P1: Introduction: Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
P2: What did the teachers in each team do?
P3: What happened next?
P3: Conclusion: What happened in the end? How did you feel about the experience? What did you enjoy the most? What do you hope for next time?
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p1
In the holidays I went to e.r.c short for edmund rice camp at e.r.c we do fun stuff like the flying fox.The flying fox is a swing kind of like a hand glider you have to sit on the saddle
and then you jump off the edge of the table and zoomed across the campsite like really fast.
p2
After the flying fox we went for lunch.For lunch we had we had pizza that we made ourselves.First we washed our hands and grabbed a bun and put tomato pastry on it then heaps of cheese beef and ham then we put it in the oven.Once it was ready we went for lunch and played outside.
p3
Free time was the best thing about camp.For
free time I went on on Ben’s shoulders and Pate’s.
I stayed on until his shoulders got tired and weak.
When free time was finished we went to wash our hands and go to the dining room for dinner.
For dinner we had burgers.The burgers had cheese
patty lettuce tomato and cucumber.After dinner we
went for more free time while the leaders were on dishes.For free time we had a dance off and I was the one doing the music.After I heard everybody cheering
for our friend bob and ashmay for winning.
P.S This camp was for a week!
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